Friday, September 14, 2012

Revelation


true sentiments touch,
not testing your patience,

just try, read my eyes!

8 comments:

  1. Teri Ankhon ke sivay is duniya me rakkha kya hai?

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  2. Interest words and image. Nice work.

    Melanie

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  3. Ia there a revelation in those eyes? Will he/she be able to see it? Well done.

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  4. There's a clash coming. Your haiku fells like a challenge being issued. You caught the conflict.

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  5. read my eyes! what a line - so original and well-written

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  6. I see the conflict too.. esp if it's going to be read incorrectly.

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