Tuesday, September 25, 2012

Paperboat Haiku


push a little joy,
puddle of the rain-water

paperboat afloat!


11 comments:

  1. "push a little joy" I really like that phrase. A special haiku today.

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  2. paperboat afloat....Love the rhyming over here....Sweet haiku!

    Life of paper boat

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  3. sweet childhood memories.. :)nicely done

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  4. Very beautifully written. I loved the 1st line :-)

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  5. "push a little joy..." Fabulous first line!!!

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  6. "Push a little joy...." fabulous first line!!!!

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  7. So optimistic and encouraging.
    I love the progression in meaning and in the letter size, well done!
    The image is very nice too.
    :)

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